Worldbuilding 099

After noticing several hits to my blog looking for worldbuilding information, I thought I would try to accomodate.

Note: I am not a professional author, and all of this should be taken with a grain of salt. Or a bag. However, maybe some of the things I use / have used might help someone. This is also extremely basic, and I will post some links at the end to help direct you nice folks to other places to look, if I haven’t helped you all that much. lol

So, here we go!

  • First and foremost, what I do is determine the genre of the world… Fantasy / Science Fiction / Historical / Etc. While there is no rule saying you can’t have lasers and demon summonings, it’s a good place to start. Since I prefer Fantasy, I’ll pick that for mine.
  • Next, determine the type of time period / level of technology for the main setting of your story / game / etc. Medieval fantasy, alien space opera, whatever. For mine, I’ll go weird and choose futuristic fantasy.
  • Now, you need some maps. Get some paper (this doesn’t have to be pretty or shown to anyone else, so inhibitions at the door if you please) and a pen (yup, pen. not a pencil). Now, draw. Aim for something continent-like shaped. You can add islands, or not. Whatever floats your boat. The important thing is to not mark out anything, even if your hand slipped. It’s all viable.
  • After you have a land mass, add in a river or three. Maybe a lake. For now, don’t mark jungles / forests / mountains / etc. Stick with rivers and lakes.
  • Now mountains. And remember, gravity is your friend. Water flows down, not up, so don’t have a river coming from a lake that flows up into the mountains. The source of water will need to be in the mountains themselves — or higher mountains.
  • Now that we have a basic map of a land mass, randomly add a few dots. These are going to represent major cities. I would suggest placing most of them by a water source, since water is life and whatnot. Not to mention the boost to trade and naval warfare. If you choose to put cities away from water sources, you will have to address how that city thrives — does it have an active alliance with another faction, where water is a main import? Rain collectors? Mystics prevalent, as they douse for water? Desert, and desperate people will kill for an Aquafina?
  • Now that you have a few cities, a land mass, a genre and a general idea for the basic type of world, it’s time to expand. Go and fetch a pencil, and start drawing national borders. If you have a large concentration of cities in a small area, is that the border between more than one nation? The hub of the most powerful? Highly contested and continual open warfare? I suggest a pencil since nations’ borders can fluctuate via conquest, alliance, treaty, etc.
  • Okay, for now, that’s enough with the map. Time to zoom in a bit. Choose the starting area for your story. This doesn’t have to be where the first word in chapter one begins, but where a lot of what will be happening in your first few scenes will be. If you’re electing to do a space story, you could be starting out on an interstellar frigate, and the land mass is the main character’s home planet. Makes no difference. Once you’ve picked it, it’s time to look around.
  • Try to place yourself in this town / area. Are there other people? What are they wearing? What do they eat? How advanced are they? Weapons? What’s their outlook on their neighbors — at war, striving for peace? A town of scholars, magicians, demi-humans, demons, lawyers? How do they bathe? Do they bathe? Sexually liberated, where gay and lesbian relationships are accepted? Sexually repressed where no one has sex for anything but the strictest terms of procreation? What instruments do they play? Do they sing? Do they weave? Answer every question that pops in your mind — and allow your muse to ask you new questions. This is, by far, the largest amount of time you’ll be on a step, so enjoy it! [Warning: don't OVERbuild. Leave yourself some wiggle room. It's good to know that the stardrive is powered by Goren dust, which is only found in the mines on Goren -- but knowing its molecular structure at this point? Not important. If it's vital to the story you're going to tell, you can do that later.]
  • From here on, it’s a matter of continually refining.

Approach the entire process as folding paper. You cannot fold any piece of paper in half more than 9 times (don’t believe me, try it!)… You begin with the whole sheet, and pick the genre [fold]. You pick the era [fold]. Map [fold]. A culture [fold].

If you’re mapping the DNA structures of the Bojinti Beast that is rumored to scour the forests to the far east — and said beast is mentioned almost once in passing — you’re trying for that 10th fold. Let it go.

Now, the links.

1 – Holly Lisle’s Website. Far and away my number one recommendations. As of this post, she has created two ebooks in her worldbuilding series (Create a Language, Create a Culture) and has two others I also highly recommend (Create a Plot, Create a Character). I have personally purchased all four, and they have each helped me tremendously. You can find her site at http://hollylisle.com/.

2 – Patricia C Wrede’s Worldbuilder Questions. This is a close second for me, and is fantastic to use in the questions step of the above process. The questions she pose are sorted by categories, and they can lead you to some very interesting places. Her site can be found at http://www.larseighner.com/world_builder/.

These links are by no means exhaustive, but they are a most excellent place to begin — and I can personally say I use them both.

Well, I hope this has helped someone! Any suggestions, or feel I left out something, drop me a comment!

Day 15. Halfway Home.

From here on, it;s the downside of the hill. And I’m officially STILL behind.

But I made some amazing progress tonight.

Word Count for the Day = 4677.

Total Word Count = 11,180

Standing = <13,820> under the 25,000 halfway point.  Which still, behind.  A lot.

But damn, did some amazing writing tonight.  Totally lost track of time.

Of course, having your main character sitting in a desolate prison, waiting for his death will do that to you.  Yay!

Day 13.

Total word count, 6,503. Just shy of 2k words for the day, and I didn’t have nearly the time I thought I would to write. Very pleased with the progress — just wish it would progress faster! hehe

Long day tomorrow — will be leaving the house before 7.30 AM and won’t be returning for about 12 hours. Ugh. The sleeps call me!

Random Funny

This tickled me to no end.

Yay, for I am geek.

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Distractions via the Sidewalk

I can’t remember where I first heard about this guy, but Julian Beever’s work just blows my mind. Here’s a couple pieces of his work, and his website is below (needless to say, both are copyrighted by him, and I am merely showing them here to share the spiffyness that is his art):

Sidewalk Art - Batman and Robin

Sidewalk Art - Footprints Under Stone

Beyond amazing, no?

His website: http://users.skynet.be/J.Beever/pave.htm

End of Day 12 Summary

First of all, I still stand by my decision.  In one day — and not even a full one at that — I am back up to 4,662 words.  That is far and away more than I have written in a single day in a very long time.  And it feels great!

Started with the blank page, which is always the hardest part for me (starting the first scene).  Ended partway through chapter four, with three of my main characters introduced and two deaths.  Yay for death!  Or something.  lol

I even took time out to watch Heroes tonight.  Not a bad episode, but felt forced — to me at least.  This whole Adam arc, I’m not loving it.  Andshowing how Peter Petreli ended up shirtless in the storage container was weak.  We all know it was a cheap way to show man flesh for the lady viewers.  We’re not stupid.  But despite that, not a bad episode.

*looks forward to tomorrow*

A Wise Decision

I can already tell that my decision to start my nano novel over, using a different story, was the right thing to do.

Word count so far, 2259.  And I’m not even close to being done for the day.  The words are coming, the scenes are flowing, and the characters are memorizing their lines without bringing their scripts onto the stage.  Even the props department seems to be pleased with the move; the CG studio is also cooperating nicely instead of remaining on strike.

Sure, I have several more words to go to even catch up to where I was from the first story, but I can feel them coming.  I can feel the story, the characters, everything.

It’s almost…

Magical.

Good Progress So Far

Spent some time this morning and afternoon worldbuilding for CoD.  I’m trying to not OVER build this time, so that perhaps the story can feel a bit more, I don’t know, story like — and less like an encyclopedia.

I’m about to start my real word count on the novel, actually — much quicker than I was anticipating.  Not complaining, mind you.  lol

That first sentence / scene is still thwarting me.  But they always do.

Nano 07 – A Hard Decision

I think I may be cutting off my nose in spite of my ankle. Or something.

This weekend while I was visiting family, I came to a very difficult decision. I’m scrapping One for my nano.

Do I still enjoy nano, twelve days into it? Yes. Do I want to finish? Yes.

Am I happy with what I’ve written on One?

No.

Not at all.

I’ve never written in this manner, turning off the internal editor… My writing is feeling like a very low budget play; I can see the lines in the trees from the poor paint job, the actors feel like they’re holding scripts. In the end, I feel like I’ll have to spend five times the amount of editing that most people do, simply because I’m more focused on a high word count than I am on telling a good story. And it’s suffering. A lot.

One example in particular is standing out amongst the other words of my word count so far… One of the characters is a little more able in performing magic than the norm. Her eyes glow and everything. But, showing her do this came way too early. Not just a scene or two early, but about half of a book early.

Other examples: the world in which it’s set in is so vast (thanks to many many MANY hours worldbuilding), I’m having to stop the story every other line of dialogue and explainwhat the heck they’re talking about. Would you know what a Sla’Korl was without some information? Me either. lol

So, as much as it pains me, especially it being this late in the month, here we go with another novel.

Children of Discord

I have my work cut out for me.

So behind. So in the wrong state.

Nano, behind.  Dreadfully.  Especially from where I wanted to be.

Not to mention, right now I’m in the wrong state.  Two states away, actually.  On top of a garage.  On an air mattress.  With a laptop that does not belong to me.

And still, I worked on nano.  Only a little, but I did.  And to me, that’s a good step.

Going to try to get some more words in tomorrow while visiting, but my niece is so pesking CUTE she’s hard to resist.  lol

PS – Yup, I was right.  The public nudity tag DID get some hits.  (Yup, busted!  hehehe)

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